The second set of feedback I gained was from the online forum EDMDistrict which is used to gain feedback on anything related to the Electronic Dance Music world (music, Social, Logos, Art, Etc...)
One of my friends Lars, who runs the facebook social group, promotion channel, and music retail website for JustAnother Visual - http://www.youtube.com/user/JustAnotherVisual , gave me some exceedingly useful feedback that was in full relation and helped me a lot on how to better develop my magazine to my target audience.
Lars Oslen
"1) The girl used on every page looks really nice, would like to the images a bit more developed (larger?) and try to show some more equipment or stage visuals to keep it related to the topic... alternatively take some more photos with some different artists?
2) The title needs to be a little more "Official". Maybe something that uses a better shade of blue is appealing and will catch your audiences eye?
3) Change the colour of the double page spread questions to something other than pink. it's hard to see against the background and will instantly put your audience off, since they don't want to have to make effort to actually read up on the topics they enjoy.
4) I like the tilt for the interview, very individual, but I personally would tilt it a little more straight so it's easier to read and understand!
5) Your colour scheme is fantastic, but don't forget to be a little bit plainer with your designs, try some white blocking (like you have on your front cover) in the rest of your designs!"
The reason I have been very subtle about asking for feedback is so that I get more proffesional reviews.
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